Story, five stars. There is no question that the story of the radium girls – young women who were exposed to toxic levels of radium while working in dial mills in the 1920s – is fascinating, dramatic and sadly.
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Moore also has an odd way of describing people. She introduces each character with a distinctive description, such as “She is an active young woman, wearing lipstick and powder…” “she is an extremely attractive woman with big gray eyes and long black hair; she considers her beautiful teeth to be her best features…” “she has an oval face” with a beautiful nose and hair…” Motorcycle Motorbike Witch Halloween T-Shirt
The text is unnecessary drama. Moore doesn’t let innate drama speak for itself; she has to make sure that readers really understand exactly how dramatic it is. Example: “The people who paint the dials are full of youth and beauty, just want to get out there and see the world.”
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